Comments for Structured Daydreams

Comment on Zitiste by rusnac

rusnac — Fri, 20 Nov 2009 11:32:49 +0000

Congratulations.

Comment on I had sex with a man by Jeanine

Jeanine — Mon, 28 Sep 2009 01:34:41 +0000

Elan, huh? Is this a metaphor? Wow. Intense.

Comment on Happy and sad by tonya

tonya — Mon, 21 Sep 2009 02:50:11 +0000

Those seven years, viewed from a perch, were music. He asked for you every day.

Comment on *Don’t think twice by tonya

tonya — Tue, 25 Aug 2009 02:00:33 +0000

Thank you, bumble bee-lan. This is lovely…

Comment on Pianos and Porches by tonya

tonya — Tue, 18 Aug 2009 03:20:27 +0000

Please ammend the bit about how your last girlfriend ‘traded you in’. You left. You chose to leave. You were never traded. That is beyond inaccurate. Be more clear and the piece will be perfect.

Comment on When you ask by Laura

Laura — Thu, 13 Aug 2009 18:17:23 +0000

writing such things to our children should be mandatory for all parents. i hope that when i have children i will remember reading this, how poignant it is, and do the same (not as well-worded as you) for them.

long time no see.

Comment on Another boy called me “Daddy” by ruth

ruth — Thu, 13 Aug 2009 18:12:23 +0000

stop being hilarious. that was too much awesome for me! ur insane.

Comment on When you ask by Lexi

Lexi — Mon, 03 Aug 2009 18:51:17 +0000

That has got to be the single most amazing thing I have read in a long time. I know I am somewhat biased since the wonderful boy you are writing about is my nephew. I laughed and got watery eyed, the best of both extreme emotions.

Comment on An experiment in minimalism by jeremiah

jeremiah — Mon, 03 Aug 2009 17:00:50 +0000

that video is priceless

Comment on When you ask by rooth

rooth — Mon, 03 Aug 2009 02:35:12 +0000

awesome